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explode136
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« on: November 06, 2010, 06:25:05 pm »

There are a few problems with your app. Firstly, the entire bio is filled with ridiculously long run-on sentences. Second, lizardmen only live around 50 years at the oldest. and third, i don't quite know why you have a [demon] tag in your name. apart from this however, the application is actually fairly sound and interesting.

Ya sorry about the really long sentances i just really like to rp and i really like to play minecraft so i was kinda excited when i wrote this but ya the reason i had demon was because i was reading the differant things about each and i thought the info i was reading was from the fairy/demon section but later realized it was in the lizardman section so i went in and changed in, and ive done so again correcting the parts you noted on. I also didn't change the bio just because i kinda like the whole story ive told here and don't really want to comprimise what ive already done here, please tell me if thats a problem and id be gald to fix it.
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